Response to “Beautiful Brains”

David Dobbs essay, “Beautiful Brains,” discusses the reasons and the importance of certain traits of teenagers. It’s always been believed that teenagers are just trouble and incapable of making good decisions, but Dobbs claims that this is just the natural urge for teenagers to take risks and be “sensation seeking.” He explains this by describing several experiments that reveal the difference between teen and adult behavior. He claims that teenagers tend to have more risky behavior because they think more about the reward of taking a risk rather than the dangers. And this natural tendency is exactly what’s beautiful about the brain; it causes teenagers to be “quite possibly the most fully, crucially adaptive human beings around.” It’s this behavior that inspired people to try new things and branch out. Without this, people would not start their own life and try something different; the human race wouldn’t be as successful if they were too cautious.

The title of the essay, “Beautiful Brains,” itself is a way for Dobbs to emphasize his view on how incredible the brain is. He is specifically referring to brains during the adolescence stage as being “beautiful.” When many people claim teenagers as being stupid, not thinking, and not using their brain, Dobbs is explaining how fascinating their behaviors are, because they are using their brains. Dobbs introduces the idea of adolescence brain development through an anecdote; he begins with an entertaining story of how his son got a speeding ticket. This personal story served as a way to draw the reader in and grab their attention. He then transitioned this story into how it made him curious about how and why teenagers have a tendency to be risky and daring. Throughout his essay, Dobbs uses logic to explain the brain development of humans through their adolescence stage. He refers to multiple tests that prove how teenagers are more likely to take risks than adults. He also uses rhetorical questions to get the reader to ponder on certain concepts, he asks, “So if teens think as well as adults do and recognize risk just as well, why do they take more chances?” He proceeds to answer the question by explaining how teenagers focus on the rewards rather than the negative consequences. And while this may appear to be a very bad thing, it’s actually a very positive aspect of human nature. Without a little danger, humans would not be flourishing like they are. Dobbs concludes his essay by addressing how adolescence is the perfect time for humans to be risky; it gives them the chance to discover new, incredible things, while learning from their mistakes and mistakes of others.